Sujatha as you call me
Is content and happy today
As I completed a great journey
on this day with your company.
On my super-anuation
I tend to look back to
the road I travelled through and
Others, who travelled along.
The path was straight
with no twists and turns
nor ups and downs
with good people around.
The journey was smooth and happy
With the caring and sharing around.
As the journey was so pleasant
I lost the sense of time in between
The smiles we exchanged
And the words unspoken
Have conveyed enough to make
A thousand words futile.
The warmth of your friendship
And the strength of your fellowship
Helped me to sail safe and smooth
Even on tidal waves and stormy waters.
It was my life partner who captained me
It was he who chartered this journey
It was he who fuelled me all through and
It was his warmth of love that propelled me.
New he joins me with children
To welcome you and your family
Whom we keep close to our hearts
to celebrate the milestone I reached today.
2 comments:
nice one. a tad long, but still good.
P.S
It is tend and not tent
Nice stuff. The length of the passage can be justified by the imporatnce of the occassion.
Its a very feel good passage, as rightly mentioned with out any twists and turns. Mild and simple..
My 2 cents..
Last para 1st word is "Now" not "New" :)
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