A page I wrote in golden ink
Not in paper, not with pen.
A shining day of twenty-fourth
Not in diary but in heart
Dazzling was thy heart though soft
Aching was my heart so heard
May I say now both are glad ?
Poem composed on 24th October 1967
& Photo on 23rd August 1973
7 comments:
the poem is good, but leaves one to ponder over the ending question?
Its a good poem, but leaves one to ponder over the end question.
beautiful poem. and a great ending. gives it a sense of dynamism.
the use of partisan sentences is very thoughtful, but i am not able to identify and appreciate the dynamism here.
Well the dynamism in the poem stems from the question asked at the end. It is a question that is asked everyday. A benchmark to work towards.
Did any one notice the starting alphabet of each line together coining a name which is also a word in malayalam that gives the answer to the ending question?
wow a coded poem leading to the genisis our family grail.
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